Your heart beating hard
Like a thunderstorm against
My back as I sleep.
R. A. Douglas
June 5,2014.
Lullaby
π³ππππ πππ! π»πππ ππππππ!
π³ππππ πππ! π»πππ ππππππ!
Your heart beating hard
Like a thunderstorm against
My back as I sleep.
R. A. Douglas
June 5,2014.
π‘. π. ππΈπΎπ°π΅πͺπΌ 
Very simple, very concrete…beautifully said!!!
Thank you @crystallshae
Your Welcome…
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I love this poem…
Lovely π
Thank you @Leroy
Nice Haiku.
Thank you @meredith
Lovely writing, thank you so much for your ‘like’ and I look forward to your words
Likewise. Thank you
this is a sweet Haiku, thank you for sharing.
No problem.
I adore this. Such great description in so few words. Happy writing π
Thank you. You too! π
The juxtaposition of the intensity of the words and the serenity of the image create something powerful. I can imagine the warmth that comes off your skin as I read it.
Why complicate things when 3 simple lines can leave such a powerful message. Great poem π
Thank you, and I agree.
My pleasure
fantastic. softer stays longer.
Thank you.
so few words ever said more.
Thank you
*nods her head as if to say … I get it* So compelling.
Thank you.
You’re welcome :-), you’re very talented.
I adore this, beautiful π